The alterations for this post is quite simple as it cant be too complicated due to it being a daycare flyer. An overload of information will ruin the simplicity of the design. Firstly, I have changed the colour to a royal blue as it isn't too vibrant so it is easier to see , in addition to being bold . I have changed the placement of the pictures so its the second thing the reader can see which portrays a good environment and pleasant vibe for the Daycare , as well as encouraging the reader to carry on reading about the Daycare.
The opening times at the bottom have been changed to a clear white , against the pink checkered border.
I did this because this is the most important piece of information if the parent decides to enroll their child into the daycare, it has to be clear what time it is open otherwise nobody will come.
To this image I changed nearly the whole van so it is simplistic and there isn't much going on. I took away the detailed brick work layering and changed it to two colours, red and orange. I did this because it is in block colours and the name of the business will be more memorable than the look of the van , in addition to this I chose these two colours because they still link with the concept of bricks and their colouring. I used the same font 'playbill' but I took away the italics so it is easier to read. I also changed the font of the contact information so that is easier to read also , contact information needs to be clear as that's the means of business if a customer needs a builder out of notice , when seeing cross them on the road.
The first thing I have changed is the thickness of the line which makes up the logo , so it is more smooth overall .In addition to this i have added pictures of the band to represent the points in the punctuation, I have done this so it is known who the band members are. I have made these specific changes to collectively make the logo stand out more because it was quite boring and dull before hand, this meaning it wouldn't appear appealing and be recognisable to anyone. Although the colour scheme hasn't changed it is still eye catching because the band is quite a boyish band , and their clothes are normally around the darker range of colours. This meaning it will appeal to the bands fan base.









